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DavnanKillder

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Joined 07/26/2019 Achieve Points 435 Posts 58

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago

    Thanks for all the feedback guys. Since Circus Puppeteer was well received, I will go with him. My only doubt is about power level. Made two versions, one epic (4/3/4 status and Shadow Madness over Potion of Madness effect) and a rare (2/2/3 status and Potion of Madness effect).



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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago

    Thanks for the feedback guys.

    Made some changes to Circus Puppeteer and to Opening Act.

    I have some doubts about the Puppeteer wording. The way it's now, If he's Sapped ir Silenced, you keep the stoled minion, but I don't know how to correct this, since Hearthstone don't have a "Leave the Battlefield" type of ability.

    Changed the effect of Opening Act to be less strong and keep the flavour of a Opening tô a bigger show.

    Maybe some feedback tomorrow.

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago

    Some initial ideas.

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago

    Congrats BloodMeFist!

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago

    Thanks for the feedback guys. Made some changes:

    - Altered Hans text ang give him a new art. Since this art seems more like a "pay or I will break your leg" guy, moved it to Gadgetzan and give him a nickname;

    - Altered the Cost, Health and the self-damage of Trustworthy.

    Some feedback:

    anchorm4n

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    Like Wailor said, the idea is good, but seems to simple.

    DestroyerR

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    Winslow is pure RNG-fiesta to me. Seems a good Hearthstone card, but I really don't like this level of RNG. Elegant Spellmaster in other hand is a very unique way of decreasing the cost of spells. I don't know how much is worth change the damage output for cost decrease, but to me is a 5 star and a winner competidor card easy.

    Pokeniner

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    I'm a fan of a good Choose One card, that said, I really liked the card, since his options can be used from combo to disrupt. Very good job.

    doingtheobvious

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    First things first, welcome aboard mate!

    Pretty solid card. Simple and good. Very god job, to me, 5 stars.

    Wailor

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    Very good card to me, ready to go, but, but I'm afraid of how powerful this can be in a zoo deck on curve, like Prince Keleseth.

    linkblade91

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    Giant Prize is a easy winner. Scarlet Vanguard remembers me Rabble Bouncer, but in the powerful side. A good card, but Giant Prize is the one.

    Demonxz95

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    Loved the idea. Amazing job, 5 star easy to me.

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago
    Quote From linkblade91

    Here's some early feedback of my own:

     

    Thanks Man, made the changes in the text. It was very wordy before.

    Some feedback later.

  • DavnanKillder's Avatar
    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago

    Some initial ideas.

    Trustworth Pact-Seeler is a high-risk aggro tool for zoolock. Maybe need some balances to give more appeal, maybe changing the cost reduction to (2) or reducing the damage to 2.

    Tax Collector Hans is a Tech Card against multiple cards being played in a single turn. Since the idea is affect both players, I made his stats a little pushed, since he can hurt you to.

    Edit:

    Made some changes in the text (Thanks linkblade91 for the idea) of Hans and a second version with another imagem. The first seems more goofy and funny to me, but I don't know if is Hearthstonish.

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago

    CardID or NameBADCARDNAMESince the Choose One effects with double summon work in a way of combining the two options when a effect force the both options to be choosen, I will stay with the second version of Nature's Channeling. I will change some stuff (Probably the name, remove the Companion part tô something more Druid) and try it with 4 or 6 cost later, but now a New idea popped and I need to Give birth to it.

    Edit:

    Some feedback.

    Hordaki

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    Simple and good. Nothing to add, ready to go.

    Linkblade

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    Liked the idea, but can be very OP If the minion is powerful. I agree with Hordaki in changing the cost and limiting the copies to 2 or 3.

    MenacingBagel

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    Spellpower to Hero in this amount with the high number of low mana Costa of Shaman os pretty scare. Maybe Downing to +2 make less frightning. That aside, solid card, I liked .

    Ozymandias

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    When you said Demon Companion, I believe you're referencing the dual class Demons of Demon Companion right? If so, sounds a little off because the card isn't a dual class and are making a reference to a card in another set. Maybe changing to random Demons with cost reduction can be a good change.

    BloodMeFist

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    Both ideas are very pretty good. Liked the a lot. Malicious seems better, but maybe one copy is more balanced.

    FenrirWulf

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    No man's land ia flavorful and pretty good, but Druid received so much and so much hate because of that, so your card may end up getting hate by table, but to me, is the best of your cards. Medidation and Harvest are pretty good to. I don't know what to think about Last Stand

    Clawz161

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    Interesting concepr, but like some people already say, the card ia nor valide to the competition =/.

    anchorm4n

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    Loved Light the Fuses! Amazing card, but like some people said, changing to 3 bots seems more balanced. Besides that, nothinf to add, amazing job.

    Wailor

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    Evolve 6 more seems a little to much, 4 seems more balanced and make a natural Evolution of the Evolution cards (pun intended), since the biggeat jump is 3 with Explosive Evolution. Besides that, amazing card.

    Demonxz95

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    The card sounds pretty good. Nothinf to add. Send it now and gain my 5 stars

  • DavnanKillder's Avatar
    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago

    Made some research and I believe that the way Nature's Channeling was written, should work like Msshi'fn Prime.

    Since the idea is cool (love the combined effect of Fandral), but not intended, I made two versions of the card, one giving  two 5/5 Minions (maybe need change to 6-cost) and the other giving a 7/7 (5/5 Rush Taunt in a single body sounded like a weak payoff).

    First Version:

    Second Version

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago

    Wait, what O.O?!

    Thanks!

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 3 months ago

    Some initial ideas thinking in Weapon Sinergy e Choose Ones (Love this Mechanic =D) 

    Edit: Founded a better Hearthstone-ish ART tô Nature's Channeling.

     

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 4 months ago

    Thanks for all the feedback.

    I will stay with Desguised Saboteur. Like some pointes, a Cristhmas Art can be flavorful. Fond this three. The elf one is more flavorful and funny, but I don't think is Hearthstone-ish. What do tou guys think?

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 4 months ago
    I will probably stay with Sand Shark, but I had one last idea before submitting.

    The idea is that he's a top student of Kel'Thuzad, then eventually becomes a lich.

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 4 months ago

    Thanks for the feedback guys.

    Made some changes to make the Disguised Sabateur more strong and changed the name and the wording of Nixue.


    Some feedback later!

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 4 months ago

    Thanks for the feedback guys!

    Changed some stats and text in the cards.

    Returning the favor, some feedback, and like some said, the level of this competition is great, almost all the cards are pretty good o.o.

    Demonxz95

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    Liked. Simple and efficient. Good job.

    linkblade91

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    Very good card. I believe it's ready to go.

    Wailor

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    Very powerful effect, but seems balanced to me in 3-cost. Don't liked the art, besides that, 5/5 to me.

    BloodMefist

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    Interesting way use of Corrupt to give Echo in Grim Work. Since Hunter has almost no buff, Magnetron seems prety go to me and the best of the two. God Job!

    DestroyerR

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    To me seems ok, maybe changing his Health to 2. Besides that, liked the combination and the Spellburst refresh idea.

    anchorm4n

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    Zevrad seems prety good, but Sleepy's a amazing design to me and I think can be a 2-cost minion, since she will go dormant for two turns for each spell, sadly, Dormant now is DQ =(. 

    Hordaki

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    Liked both cards, like you said, this competition level is great. The idea of Kobold Schemer to me is the best, but I believe Scheme is not a Keyword, so I dont know if it's legal =(.

    ChickyChick

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    I don't know if Razor Petal counts, but the other two I believe are OK. A very good advantage card. Good job.

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 4 months ago

    Since Dormant is not valid, I made a new Epic card. Well, Overkill is all around hahah.

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 4 months ago

    The gived card need to be a good one?

    First idea.

    Edit: Second Idea

     

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 4 months ago

    I don't think so.

    According to Hearthstone Wiki, evergreen keywords are Battlecry, Choose One, Combo, Deathrattle, Discover, Divine Shield, Freeze, Lifesteal, Poisonous, Outcast, Overload, Rush, Secret, Silence, Stealth, Spell Damage, Taunt and Windfury.

    Looks like a evergreen because the effect born in Un'goro with Sherazin, but not like a keyword.

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 4 months ago

    Thanks guys =D

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    Design Finalist 435 58 Posts Joined 07/26/2019
    Posted 3 years, 4 months ago

    Some initial ideas.

    Enchanted Shotgun needs some changes I believe, maybe his +3 buff is to much to face purposes, what do you guys think? 

     

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